Octopus Pie: There Are No Stars In Brooklyn

Octopus PieOctopus Pie: There Are No Stars In Brooklyn is the first collection of Merideth Gran’s web-comic of the same name. The comic follows the life of Eve Ning, her pot-smoking roommate Hanna, and a constellation of supporting characters.

We first meet Eve as she and her boyfriend are breaking up:

Setting – Eve’s Mom’s House: Eve, James, and Eve’s Mom are sitting in the living room. James has just broken up with Eve over the phone, but still won’t leave.

James: And I mean, the fact is that billions of universes exist where Eve and I aren’t dating. We mainly exist to be broken up forever, y’know? And like you can totally apply that to life and death …

(His words continue in the background while Eve gets more and more upset and her mother looks more and more entertained. Finally, Eve gets up and takes James’ arm).

Eve: All right, Steven Schpielberg. Out we go.

James: But I’m not done Schpieling!

Eve (pushing James ahead of her): Don’t be silly. You’ve already shown me the light!

James: I have? Really?

Eve (slamming the door behind him): Hell yes. No more existential boyfriends!!

Mom: Not even in the multiverse?

Eve: Never!

Eve and her friends are twenty-somethings navigating post-college life with varying success. The book is divided up into chapters, each one following a distinct story.

I had a few issues with this series. The drawings are simple line drawings. I found them to be a little too simple, often having trouble finding ways to distinguish the characters from one another. I also found the story lines a little disjointed. The comic is divided up into chapters each telling a different tale from Eve’s life, but each individual storyline did not always flow well for me. The beginning can feel a little disconnected from the end of the story or the punch line gets a little lost, leaving the reader wondering if they had missed something. I chalked most of this up to the serial nature of its publication. That is, rather than being a novel that an author could revisit and re-edit, once a strip is published, the author cannot go back and re-work any choppy plot lines.

But by far my biggest issue with this comic is that it is about hipsters. I didn’t know about hipsters before I read the comic. Many of the ways the people in the comic talked and comments they made mystified me. So I started doing my research (including asking my sister, who is always up-to-date on pop culture). I went to the Octopus Pie web site to read more about the characters. I got my teenagers to read the comic (they were uninterested).

Matt Granfield, in his book HipsterMattic, defines hipsters in this way:

“While mainstream society of the 2000s had been busying itself with reality television, dance music, and locating the whereabouts of Britney Spears’s underpants, an uprising was quietly and conscientiously taking place behind the scenes. Long-forgotten styles of clothing, beer, cigarettes and music were becoming popular again. Retro was cool, the environment was precious and old was the new ‘new’. Kids wanted to wear Sylvia Plath’s cardigans and Buddy Holly’s glasses — they reveled in the irony of making something so nerdy so cool. They wanted to live sustainably and eat organic gluten-free grains. Above all, they wanted to be recognized for being different — to diverge from the mainstream and carve a cultural niche all for themselves. For this new generation, style wasn’t something you could buy in a department store, it became something you found in a thrift shop, or, ideally, made yourself. The way to be cool wasn’t too look like a television star: it was to look like as though you’d never seen television.”

So Eve works at an independent organic food store and her friends reject pop and consumer culture. Putting aside my personal feelings about hipsterism, this is an adequate comic. It did not blow me away with art or well-constructed plots, but it is a relatively new comic and I have confidence that Gran will improve as she gains experience. It’s just that the comic is really targeting a very specific market.

I’m sure the hipsters would be pleased with my lack of “getting it”. After all, I’m not supposed to.

Recommended for hip teens and young adults (occasional nudity, lots of pot, swearing)

Octopus Pie: There Are No Stars In Brooklyn
by Merideth Gran
ISBN: 978-034552043
Village Press, 2010
Publisher Age Rating: teen

How to Pen & Ink: The Manga Start-Up Guide

Manga is an art and like any art form it requires practice and guidance. Although I am not someone who draws, I enjoy reading books about how to acquire the needed skills to become a comic artist. It’s always a topic that was in demand among the manga fans at my library, many of whom dreamed of becoming manga artists themselves.

Those who have worked their way through basic “how to draw” books and easier guides to creating comics are probably looking for a more in-depth instructional manual. Digital Manga’s How to Pen & Ink is certainly in-depth, though it narrows its focus almost exclusively onto the skills of inking a comic, so readers are expected to have a foundation of drawing skills, knowledge of basic art terms (perspective, etc.), and an understanding of how manga works. Readers that have that will find How to Pen & Ink a useful tool.

The book starts with a close up examination of how manga artists Oh!Great (Tenjo Tenge), Satoshi Shiki (Kami-Kaze), and Yasuhiro Nightow (Trigun) build a scene. In addition to photographic guides, the manual also interviews all three about the tools they use, their drawing process, how they get ideas, etc. Following that are three especially useful sections. The first talks about the process of moving from drawing doodles to creating characters to building scenes for those characters….

This review was originally posted at Good Comics for Kids. Please visit the original post to see the rest of the review.

How to Pen & Ink: The Manga Start-Up Guide
ISBN 9781569709177
Digital Manga, 2006

Max Finder Mystery: Collected Casebook, Vol. 1

Was your artwork stolen just before the school art show? Did a thief try to take your new stereo? Are you being blamed for scratching a friend’s new CD? Never fear, help is on the way! Max Finder and Alison Santos, the stars of OWL Magazine’s popular graphic novel mystery series, are here to help. Using keen eyes, sharp minds, and logical thinking they’ll solve any crime that comes across their path.

O’Donnell’s mystery series is the perfect read for kids who love Encyclopedia Brown, but also enjoy comics. In this collection, Max and Alison solve ten cases revolving around the people in their town. The cases are all four pages long, making them perfect to pick up and sample at leisure. Both boys and girls should enjoy the stories as each of the two detectives has their moment to shine, so even though the series is named for Max, it’s obvious that they are equal partners. The other kids in the town are regular participants in the mysteries, allowing readers to get to know them. Though those characters are slightly stereotypical–there’s the girly girl, the athletic boy, the nerd, the bully–they don’t always fall into the roles expected of them when it comes to the mysteries. Allowing the meeker kids to be the criminals and the bullies to be innocent is a good technique for keeping the story fresh.

Cho’s art is both realistic and cartoonish….

This review was originally posted at Good Comics for Kids. Please visit the original post to see the rest of the review.

Max Finder Mystery: Collected Casebook, vol. 1
Liam O’Donnell; art by Michael Cho
ISBN: 978-2-89579-116-4
Owl Kids, 2006

I Really Want to Be First!: A Really Bird Story

Really Bird promises to deliver surprise twists, high drama, and a lot of laughs, but it falls flat.

This story begins with an introduction of our three main characters. Really Bird, our protagonist who really wants to be first and his friends, Pup, and Cat. They banter back and forth through a couple of different scenarios like climbing up a tree. This situation is pretty unfair to Pup, the dog, who isn’t not only not good at climbing, but he’s terrified about being up on top of a tree. Really Bird has Cat help Pup down and then Cat celebrates herself for helping Pup. Pup is the only polite and considerate character in this book, as we see him say thank you to Cat for helping him down from the tree that he was peer pressured to climb up. 

Next, we see the characters argue about who was first on the ground. This short story concludes with Really Bird declaring that he was first, and that he is going to be the leader to take them all home. Really Bird wraps up this tale by happily announcing that he wanted to be first today and he was. 

This was a very poorly written book. It delivers a terrible message to young readers and fails to hold your attention despite it being such a quick read. I read this to my child and he was bored and confused with the ending. Additionally, I wish that the text used a consistent sentence case for young readers to see correctly written English, however many words or letters are capitalized when they are not part of a name or a title, for example “OKay” or “Today I really REALLY want to be First”. This may be providing a poor example for the children that this book is designed for to start learning correct sentence structure.

The artwork is very cute. The style is sure to please any child from the beginning inside cover showing our three main characters walking into the story, to the three of them leaving together on the back cover. The drawings are simple, cute and have a bright color theme throughout. This is a picture book, so there are no panels or typical graphic novel page organization. Lastly, the text is a cute, but a large and easy to read font. 

Overall, this book shows selfish characters getting what they want, an example of peer pressuring a friend into a dangerous situation, and celebrating getting to be first. The lesson for children to take away from this story is unclear, perhaps it’s that being first is the best? On the back cover it states that, “Really Bird adventures deliver surprise twists, high drama, and a lot of laughs. Friendship and emotional learning are at the heart of every book.” I missed where there was a plot twist, as the plot was completely predictable, there were absolutely no jokes or obvious humor, and I hope that children don’t learn anything about how to treat others in friendship from the examples in this book. As an avid reader, mother, and librarian, I have read thousands of picture books and this one unfortunately, I couldn’t possibly recommend. 

I Really Want to Be First!: A Really Bird Story Vol. 1
By Harriet Ziefert
Art by  Travis Foster
OtherRed Comet Press, 2022
ISBN: 9781636550183

Publisher Age Rating: 5-7

NFNT Age Recommendation: Picture Books (3-8)